Fennah Rants 2

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I was about to fix the Winiwardian excerpt, but the building styles are too messed up and boring to fix, so basically Sombra builds with wood, Locket builds with brick and Winifred makes most of her structures out of failures.

Also, here's the Act of Violence excerpt summarized.

Kivouachians were violent until Locket establishes a law telling them to only kill for a good reason. This law causes bloodletters in Bloodhalls to still kill people and have it be legal. These Bloodhalls were basically like Kivouachian colosseums.

Fontaine is also some selfish dude who is smart and fills his pockets with stuff

Some discussion between Locket and Felicity is just a conversation between the two on how they don't judge by appearance, but ability.

This next one is a conversation between Lucy, Ludwig and Shale on how success can still be had with a disability like how Quinn's eyes don't work, Methusa has only 3 arms and Sombra has no pupils, but can still get around well.

This book excerpt is about how decapitated bodies are contorted for emotional pleasure and to feel better

The next book excerpt is about Fiona. It's short and simple, but in the first part, remove was, seemingly, replace crested with axe like, change needley to needled and remove long. In the second part, remove the parts about her claws because you just mentioned that, removed crested and remove of spacetime.

Fontaine goes down a set of stairs with Harlow and Mystique and tells Bazzil and Taezzer they are leaving. Fontaine asks Bazzil to fetch Ludwig after he argues with him. Taezzer asks about Lucy and Mystique says she'll escort her. Lucy sees Harlow and Mystique and knows they are untrustworthy.

Ludwig discusses friendship and love with Lucy and that friendship ends in murder while love requires a lot of trust.

The first excerpt is just Harlow watching Dalton and then going to tease her body to people who she sees as prey and makes her decision on who it will be.

The second excerpt is an Inker attempting to strangle Harlow then when he fails because of her strength, she tells them to show her to her place.

The bitch who made Royal said how she'd describe Fennah's characters

Ones I recognize:

Giraffe mom - Methusa

Cinnamon roll - Hyzenthlay

Gorilla lizard - Hayden

Long Catto - Wyley

Cheshire and Plague - Taezzer and Bazzil

Golden Bitch - Winifred

Elderly Buck - Sombra

Polkadot cat - Lucy Lacemaker

Edgy mannequin - Locket

Corrupted Bunny Hoe - Harlow, bleh

Big Mouth Lassy - Ludwig

Skittle Teeth - Yeshua

Yin and Yang - Bamforth and Whittaker

Fluffy Axolotl - Quinn

Donkey dragon - Felicity

Celestial masochist - Celia

Caterpillar moth - Thallius

Ones I don't know

Mistletoe sacrifice - might be Dalton

Long feesh

Mystery boi

Shark man

Velvet reindeer

Bat lizard

Mr. Smiley

Devil dog

Either one of three things happened:


 * 1) I'm too stupid to understand who they are
 * 2) They didn't describe them well enough to pinpoint a character
 * 3) They know something we don't
 * 4) Edit: They know something we don't. Bat lizard is Greta and long feesh is the seahorse with three sets of tits

In the list of characters Fennah said he wanted to do animation tests for, the majority of them are females with tits or big hips or look really hard to rig.

Freyda, Locket, Mystique, Harlow, Taezzer, Mystique, Shale and Wyley

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Idk why he spared Dorothy and Fiona from his fetishes, but believe me, we'll see it soon

There is a new character mentioned named Elmyra. She doesn't seem to be too bad of a character, but her description is overdone.

Let's talk about model degradation:

Yeshua:

The first time we see Yeshua, he is not a bad looking character. He just has the red cat like appearance with weird rainbow teeth. Now, he's an overdone mess who looks terrible and those bright teeth were never fixed.

Hyzenthlay:

She had a crouched squirrel look when we saw her in Satellite City and she could've stayed that way, but no, you had to give her big hips and an emo haircut

Fleischer:

Like his Kiwifarms thread has stated, he's degraded in design a lot. He looks slimy in the Bloke animation test and he's severely overdetailed.

Helgan:

She had a good design, not too overdone and not too colorful, but now she's just an overweight seizure inducing abomination with big tits.

Wexle:

She once had a very interesting design. The stripes on her were cool and her tentacles weren't oversized. Now she has big nipples, slimy abs, big thighs and oversized tentacles.

Mystique:

She was once was a small tittied whore with a mildy revealing corset. Now she has no corset and pubes. At least her tits werent oversized.

Lucy Lacemaker:

Lucy is one of the most degrading characters designs. She had a way more animalistic form originally, but when she was resigned for the second time, the bullshit starts. The fluffy shoulders, the abs and the big hips were added in. It gets worse with her 2021 redesign, her neck turned into a tree trunk and her eyes are over textured.

Winifred:

Winifred looked good when she was first introduced to have an animation test. However, she grew a tumor and some weird type of buttcheeks when it came to the actual test.

Locket:

She was an interesting design as the porcelain mannequin. It got weird when her quad tit weight baring form was revealed, but her tits looked like stone and weren't really fetishy. Now, she's a slimy body bitch who looks worse.

I was about to put Harlow on this list, then I realized she was never well designed

I don't really mind Celia's current design, but I'm starting to think her hair was changed to locks because Fennah knows he doesn't know how to make hair work.

The Celia animatic came out today and its ducking terrible. The writing is ass, the renders of Celia and the background look terrible and it's all edgy with contorting bodies and blood.

Fennah's once again overdescribing his characters, what they're doing and the scenery. This makes it really hard to understand and this needs to be fixed. He's also using too many metaphors, which makes this even worse.

The psychics defying aspects of this world are starting to get really stupid. This has gotta be one of the worst aspects of this book.

Celia blended in well with the background, but too well. This made her really hard to see.

She was described as exotic and showing off her nipples and other parts. Liking to your fetishes Sam.

Those renders of her just get even worse.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPIzC0htQJnKV0PrRIGImu7IwLFU2fN473sbOw?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn What the fuck?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipODg68nZjkKdnp3mrdsveKGleHWVKbqzG3C_SPr?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn This is bad. This "Elmyra" is overdescribed and really hard to go along with without a visual.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPmkoSGrwPq1kfwb80DfRAuyHsfWlVZV_e20YQ?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn This character doesn't have tits or big hips? I'm surprised. That chest is a little fucked up though and why does it have so many legs. Also, that long neck.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMOO3naaVo4uQEaf9sjY8-exYKGUtOvyX4qhZY?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn I'm guessing Kivouachians didn't have hair stylists, her hair is a fucking mess and what's up with the seizure inducing sky?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMwHtbkK4bGr7c3ONyPGaHfuwFT3e-k5HkAlac?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn Nothing is noticeable about Celia besides her gold piercings and chest due to the sparkly overdetailed background

A https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMtTGFVljZsK9ZowL8Hg7MD857CJcpXhxxo22Q?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn hey! Contributor! Why did you do this?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNBAMo77Kajq38drD_Zy38FfF_Q66n9qySYBM4?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn you fucked up the hair and eyes

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipOrdbAIJROYGUWXgCBNjPAqWLVWB0qOGPDKB1k?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn great. More of the seizure inducing shitshow that is Helgan.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNTRQbQt9mxIRvO7hnBybjSwo69PXlcmqhWeOY?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn Lucy's legs are fucked up in this shot and her feet look weird.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMHI3yUtg68nIyJn86WJmx3Zfry2-Y9cV6UKS8?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn she looked better here, how did she degrade so fast? Oh right, Sam doesn't know how to animate.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPLr0F1OGWF4CCqHVgrkXc5wbmNXAxyR5oKrc8?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn why would anybody do this? Wtf?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMCsWLSd1LaVrhAtexm3uV8w9FzhUPGKDNglTY?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn this render of Fleischer isn't good in the slightest. He doesn't get any better.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipOdkA_NNB3wl113qwgBcXKAB0hNoRKsGsFjv-E?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn why are the hips so big? Why is the hair looking drawn on?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPgyRqxhLs40bEm_Z_-LPT8mpq6Yt8Vid5OOoA?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn I think someone already added this one

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNX3x0iyRO6EvZ6gKFObzqu7vrk-op7tvtmvtg?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn this puts elaboration on her terribly elongated and bent neck

If you look at https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMUEghcJ5wPoH193xL9eyduEzcItDcWFVJqzF0?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn and https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNvxYsiPkzwcYJE0UQUg54d-5Dzh1la6uFPttQ?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn, you'd realize her ears changed size.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNhLMBp8lRlNqnP7FLLz8vptTeALS3n42f9L3E?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn winifred broke her fucking jaw

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNJGSlDDcLgTXtS2Cx_VjwcHpJFwncfzoHuMq8?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn hey! She doesn't look too bad!

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPC11txkBo752RNglSaWY-SCTBJPYGcavYxVU2Q?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn Of course, it's Locket with her tits out. The white parts are to make her nipples more noticeable.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMKzlJOnrAUx_nkJTB9p9GdJEdl_SWE4cGxYSQ?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn *cheers* she's clothed this time!

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipOTlGt4yAkH1dhtg-4dZLqe00Ni7EnYuHrNwzDz?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn she doesn't even fit in with the background and her body looks slimy

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipM4Qp4KljvDFqbtTi-zDQVoQd-Rg8Cd6Gi3MU5B?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn you can't even render her from behind. She has a whole mass of hair on her head and her tail is ugly thin.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMQeMc3aisKMzeUbePapFjVOTlTe7Io51gjsO7t?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn ow the edge! Is there any Kivouachian that isn't into gore and decapitation

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMsEYK0zSkzapyjyqAJyfTk4nXjvW6pbeB2GY7v?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn what's up with her face? And look! Another decapitated 4 titted bastard.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPspiFab2COh-mqFsLHfb8i-rS4nW7M4d22LMZm?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn the fetishy slimy hips and the psychics defying floor she is walking on just makes me wanna puke

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNKH9iIWuc86pyNIPGOpSmsW7-qF5OhkWSVQ2O0?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn that fire victim looks disgusting and how can she tell what killed them by smelling them?

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipP6rYaNQ1QnVi4IbrGfrkigqVkP9cmijlQ6IPs0?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn can't even see her damn face

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPRA0fUBi0N4vHtZ7vqnoDPKl5_v1JJsKXFOuqu?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn once again, slimy body

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipOKwWMC1yO9PYvXh5DI8MlBDjANkK9-4Kh-vPnW?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn those houses look drawn badily

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipMIsclfIEsVWrD05jTpvn5UELEDBykw4talwTBG?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn look at her oversized nipple and disproportionate body.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipPiDiJ8RgVePWH8B4MFsZ0YnqMDNS6ImBlShQ49?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn this looks good and is so much better then what we have today. However, she has 6 nostrils. Isn't that a little much?

Fennah's fanbase is retarded too. They like characters with big tits and they don't seem to see what's wrong with it. The nipples have also seemed to have impacted them too and they think it's necessary to add tits and vaginas to their characters (don't even get me started with Ericka and her self insert Mystique). There was somebody asking about Lucy Lacemaker's onlyfans and this just made me puke. I don't understand who'd want to fuck an red and white overweight rabbit monster.

I hope Fennah's account gets taken down for pornography. Twitter or YouTube? Yes

He was complaining about not being able to upload Winifred's animation test because of the song. This is because nobody wants to see your overweight shiny deer animated to a decent song.

How I'd describe Fennah's characters:

Red cat with firecracker teeth

Decaying corpse lion

Indecently fetish-bludgened squirrel

Slimy unicorn cat

Floppy big winged dragon

Furry axolotl

Edgy satanic goat

Seizure inducing pink cat

Mr. No Eyes

Grey slimy horned alien with hentai tentacles

Bisexual fetish bait with red horns

Mr. Skinny arms

Ugly muscular red and white mary sue

Mischievous six armed bastard

Golden overweight deer with a tumor on its chest

3 armed wank material

Old goat that looks like it has dementia

Red and black deer with every feature at once

Dragon-humanoid with 16 eyes

Six eyed rabbit

Multi(fetish) nipple masochist

Fluffy mane lizard

One eyed rabbit snake

Red monster with an axe for a head

Four eyed rabbit with palm tree ears

Crouched plague doctor

Innocent and goofy looking cat

Elongated lion with every animal feature under the sun

6 legged dragon

Chernobyl caterpillar

The offspring of a panther and a phantom from animal jam

The only fan oc to be in The August Few is Mystique and not other characters like Edmuntine and Titania. This is because Mystique more fits with his fetishes as opposed to them.

Thallius is by far one of the most ugliest characters to ever appear. That face is the worse thing I've seen in a while and his mouth is disgusting.

Wexle is just pure fetish material. If you watch her animation test, it's apparent Fennah has a thing for her hips and biceps.

Fixing Fennah's character designs:

Every character is going to have the big hips removed and replaced with hips more like the males in this along with the pupils being normal and them having one belly button. I am also going to give characters like Wexle and Yeshua normal names

Yeshua: (New name: Yosef)

Remove the second of ears, make the remaining ears smaller, remove the white tips, remove the white around his eyes, on his cheeks and nose, remove the black around the eyes, fix the sunken eye look, make the cheek, ear and neck fur thinner, remove the white on his chest, make his chest darker, remove the second set of arms, change the teeth and nails to a normal color, replace the 9 tails with one big one and fix the feet.

Hyzenthlay (New name: Hailey)

Make the ear insides look normal, remove the emo haircut, remove the excess fur from her back, cheeks, chest, and tail, fix the chest, make her toenails a bit shorter and male character hips.

Ludwig (New name: Luke)

Remove the excess hair, remove the black circles around his eyes and make his eyes bigger, remove the protrustions from his neck and the slits they were in, fix and make his neck shorter, remove the chest hair, make his coat more covering, and make his hands smaller.

Felicity

Make her ears smaller, remove the blue from her chest, shoulders, rear and ear tips, remove the groove in her chest, make the wings smaller, make her chest area smaller and make her body more like a dog.

Fleischer:

Remove his horns and other protrusions, give him four legs, make his wings smaller, fix the feet and make his teeth less sharp

Quinn:

Remove the first and third set of ears and eyes, remove the magenta around his eyes, remove the excess fur, fix his nose, remove the fangs, remove the second set of arms, make his nails less shiny and make the lower chest normal

Dalton:

Make his horns further from his eyes, remove the diamonds from his eyes, remove the tufts of fur from his ears, make his eyes more visible, make his teeth less sharp remove the spikes from his back, fix the feet and make him more goat like.

Helgan:

Remove the excess hair from her head, ears and tail, make her lips and eyelashes a darker pink, remove her breasts, remove the pubic hair which she probably has, fix her feet and male character hips.

Whittaker (New name: William)

Remove the protrusions from his head, remove the black off his ear tips, make the ears smaller, remove the hat, remove the drawn on stitches, fix the feet and male character hips.

Wexle (New name: Wendy)

Remove the horns except the closest to her mohawk, make her mohawk smaller, fix the neck, remove the weird wrinkles/stripes from her face, remove the tentacles, remove the nipples, remove the biceps, remove the slimy skin look, fix her chest, remove the hair from her arms and male character hips.

Mystique (New name: Mysty)

Remove the first set of horns, remove the red dots, make her hair less messy, remove her third eye, make the mouth normal, remove the horns from her neck, fix the chest-neck area, remove the tits, remove the pubes, remove the marks on her tail, fix the feet, remove the claw from her leg and male character hips.

Bamforth (New name: Brad)

Remove the sets of arms besides his second set, make his arms less skinny, remove his hat, remove the horns and make his torso normal

Lucy:

Fix her red eye, fix the ear insides, remove the lipstick, remove the whiskers, remove the muscular look on his neck, make the arms less muscular and male character build.

Fontaine (New name: Fin)

Remove the hair on the back of his head, remove the lip color, fix his neck, remove the first and third sets of arms, make his legs shorter and fix his feet

Winifred

First of all, we're going back to this form https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNqsARyKsRcYRu51HFJ2ZfJoFZT8oRVYRVhy0U?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn

Make her horns the sane size, remove the spikes from her head, Make her ear insides normal, make her ears smaller, remove the neck and chest muscles, make the neck smaller, fix the feet and male character build.

Methusa:

Remove the other three sets of ears, make her neck shorter, remove the tits, give her only two arms and male character build.

Sombra (New name: Samuel)

Remove the horns on top of his head and replace them with two horns of normal size, remove the excess fur on the ears, make the ears smaller, make the eyes normal, remove the neck flaps and neck muscles, make the coat more covering, remove the tails, fix the feet and normal male character build.

Locket:

Remove her horns, remove the second set of ears, make her head not seem split open, remove the smaller eyes, make her eyes look normal, make the mouth normal, make her neck shorter and less muscled, remove the slimy look from her chest and neck, remove the tits, make her neck hair go down to her jacket, make the tops of the jacket not spring out, make the jacket less revealing, fix the feet and male character build.

Hayden:

Remove the horns except the ones on top his head, make the two remaning horns look the same, make the eyes look closer together, remove the white around his mouth, remove the tail from his back, remove the bumps from his arms, make his fingers shorter and normal male character build.

Holly:

Remove the red, remove the excess fur, remove the fangs, remove the extra eyes and make the ears smaller

Celia:

Remove the piercings, make her eyes look normal, fix the wrinkles on her face, remove the white on her lips, remove the other two sets of nostrils, remove the nipples, fix the feet and a wolf like build.

Hux (New name: Hawk)

Remove the hat, remove the swirls on his face, remove the muscled chest and neck look, remove the first and third tail and normal human build.

Shale:

Remove the skin color hairs, make the eyes normal, remove the lipstick look, make the neck shorter and less budged out, remove the nipples, fix the skin on the stomach area, fix the nails and fix the feet

Dorothy:

Make her mane not go up to her head, make the mouth smaller, make her stripes smaller in length, remove the spikes, make her skinnier, remove the pink from her tail, make the nails on her front feet smaller and fix her back feet.

Nathanial:

Remove the weird mass of hair on his bead, remove the second set of arms and give him legs because that tail doesn't look like it does shit.

Fiona:

Remove the axe like thing, make her have visible eyes, color her body better so we know what is where, make the neck shorter, fix the torso, remove the second, third and fourth sets of arms, possibly fix the feet and male character build.

Freyda:

Remove the horns on her head, remove the other three sets of ears, make her eyes more visible, make her chest area smaller, remove the nipples, remove the tail protrusions and fix the feet

Harlow (New name: Payton)

Make the ears smaller, remove the second set of eyes, remove the black around her eyes, remove the black from her nose, make her hair stand up, remove the grooves on her face and neck, remove the black from her hands and feet, remove her nipples, remove the pubes, fix the feet and male character build.

Bazzil (New name: Brady)

Put his hat on normal, make his mouth more noticeable, make nails shorter and normal male character build

Taezzer (New name: Teagan)

Move her ears to the top of her head, make her ears entirely ginger, remove the orange from her face, remove the extra fur from her face, make her ears smaller, remove the first set of nostrils, remove the color from the lips, get rid of the neck muscles, make her chest budge out less, make the fur on her arms less thick, get rid of the weird gold things she has, make her coat less covering and male character build.

Wyley:

Remove three of his eyes, fix his ear insides, remove his horns, make the neck shorter, remove the muscled look on his chest, remove the third set of legs, bring his second chest up a little, remove the red on his paws and remove the tail or replace it with something better.

Elmyra:

Make her neck smaller, make her ears smaller, make her wings smaller, spread out her stripes, fix her legs and feet, remove the second set of arms and make the tail

small

er

Greta:

Lucky Greta only needs a few of her traits fixed. Remove the nipples and abs.

The seahorse with tits:

Remove the blue on her fins, remove the tits and flabby skin and remove the glowing things on her back

M'Kay, Fennah's doing commissions. We got this fluffy goat dragon with glowing eyes https://mobile.twitter.com/SamFennah/status/1408141633040928769/photo/3

And the offspring of scp-096 and the Minecraft wither

https://mobile.twitter.com/SamFennah/status/1407334906439606276/photo/1

Also, Fennah showed us Harlow with a book excerpt, but never any other characters in the list, which is mean

He tweeted that he needed a Bronx accent for one of his females, but he never said who (I'm guessing Harlow)

I'm also going to review Fennah's current book trailers. Let's go or not!

The Preview animatic:

0:25: Overdescriptive background telling, wake me up when I care

0:41: What's up with Dalton's ear?

0:59: Okay we get it, the meadow was shiny

1:23: What the heck does Hayden add to this?

2:06: Dalton looks better under this filter

3:08: That background is made out of candy and you can't tell me otherwise

3:20: Like we need to know how photosynthesis works in retarded furry land

3:43: The background is made by candy or lsd. Noted.

4:05: Lucy's big lips. I can't

4:08: What was the book's title? You're throwing us off

4:33: We already know that. It literally just said that five seconds ago

5:21: I don't think that's actually possible

5:29: In his voice of who what now?

6:04: This idiot's Lucy imitation makes me rather drink ketchup milk

6:22: This is actually a good method

6:28: Shale looks terrible. Oh yeah, she always does

6:31: Oh, nice, Lucy's buttcheeks

6:36: "You mean the bbbbbb" -Spongebob

7:01: I can't even see what Lucy is sitting on

7:24: yeah, I won't

7:49: How does this even work? How do the Kivouachians get from place to place?

7:58: What's all this space-time bullcrap in the Kivouack? A lame excuse for your mary sue pyschics defying world?

8:57: Why is her tail up to her shoulders?

9:26: I dont see any gills, this is plot convenience

9:55: Did you really have to call Methusa busty, or did you have your hand in your pants

10:12: That's how it works in general, stupid

11:25: Information? Since when?

The rest of the video is literally just Winifred being a jerk and Sombra being an old angry man and then arguing. This seems more sibling rivalry and they're babbling like stupid children

Lucy Lacemaker, aka Fennahs "lesbian" waifu:

0:10: The parts of her left leg are welded together

0:32: Beautiful? She needs to comb her hair?

0:47: The only elements Lucy has are furry bait and messy hair

0:54: That doesn't look like a pear

1:49 I thought you said people were terrified of her

2:16: What's up with her legs

Big fat cat, uh I mean Helgan:

0:25: No way! She's tall and also heavy? I could've never knew

0:38: What's your problem with hair?

1:05: At least the lips and eyelashes look less seizure inducing

1:11: This is legit a wank render. You can't tell me otherwise

1:13: You got off to this. I know it

1:44: I can't even describe how deformed her chest is

2:05: She seduces people, great story telling

2:19: Oh, foot fetish, of course

I'm not doing Celia, I already committed on her animatic.

https://photos.google.com/share/AF1QipOndKAE91-BHWBu-BKrLqxWnlNav_P2oAkgVcOOzel3EtK4H1w3eOVxet2YyP6alQ/photo/AF1QipNl-7PlPrTiVRKunOXK0NaPUyONJMVlWOSkUIk?key=aXEyRkN2ZnVhTENmeFA5aXVOaUFpejJyS2g4d2tn who the he'll is this (hey past me! This is Penelope! Not Butika or Sally Porter)

The Satellite City wiki needs to do a lot to be a database for The August Few:


 * 1) They need to specify that the wiki is now a database for The August Few and make it become such
 * 2) They need to update the character pages to have the new designs
 * 3) They need to make the wiki have only canon character information. They are trying to split it between book and show canon, but the show canon doesn't matter anyway.
 * 4) They need to make pages for basic characters like Bamforth, Whittaker, Mystique, Holly, Hayden, Dorothy and Fiona delete pages of characters like Titania and Sullivan because they are to not be appearing in the book, not make pages of Bob, Maargit and Andrew for the same reason and make pages for the revealed book characters like Harlow, Bazzil, Taezzer, Elmyra and Wyley
 * 5) They need to have pages about the Kivouack's structures and other stuff, not just the characters
 * 6) They also need to delete the useless pages like the one about The August Few as a book and Sam Fennah's info page. Just specify what The August Few is and say that it's by Sam on the front page.
 * 7) They need a page of rules
 * 8) They need better admin because the current one is just watching over the wiki and not adding anything.
 * 9) Make a separate page for each area of the Kivouack and Locket's Laws
 * 10) They need to have true information about their abilities because Lucy can't actually have her head return to her body without help
 * 11) Don't describe their appearances because you literally have photos of them on the page.

Getting started:

- Yeshua, Hyzenthlay, Ludwig, Felicity, Fleischer, Quinn, Mystique, Lucy, Fontaine, Winifred, Sombra, Celia, Shale and Locket all have new/August Few designs

You know what I'm gonna do? I'm going to make a Fennah wiki with all the known characters. Make sure to check it out.

Apparently, there's this bitch named Greta that was revealed. It still bothers me that she has nipples, but she's not that badly designed

I'm just going to refer to that seahorse character as the seahorse with three sets of tits until I find out her name

It really annoys me how there is not one Fennah character without tits, nipples or something that moves like tits. I know Fennah wants to make them "unique" but there is a ton of other ways to specify that the character is a girl besides giving them tits or other wank material.

Lucy is a complete mary sue. She is involved in a lot of The August Few and basically leaves no space for the amount of other characters in this story. If you want to include all those characters, you'll have to make space for them and stop trying to shove Lucy in our faces

The seahorse with the three sets of tits is named Penelope and Sam said she basically never appears in The August Few,. which proves there isn't enough space for every character.

What I can piece together with Fennah is that Lucy and Yeshua, the two most annoying characters, are the characters that appear the most in The August Few

The thing that annoys me the most about the the Celia animatic at 9:23 when her feet look extremely and obviously disproportionate.

Why is Fennah trying to do 2000 things at the same time? That's probably why his animation skills are ass! He's planning on doing a Locket animation test, an animation test of Bazzil and Teazzer, a book trailer on top of trying to release the damn book! Try focusing on one thing at a time!

Once again, I got my hopes too high. We'll probably see his shitload of book characters in 2050.

Dude, are e you ever going to get Locket's animation test done? You announced it back in March and it's still not out.

He stuck with his plans until now. He did a Lucy animation test and a Winifred animation test and he has the Locket animation test "in progress" and he said he was going to do one for Wyley, but instead he's doing Bazzil and Teazzer

Bazzil and Teazzer look terrible. Let's just hope they have a better canon image.

Apparently Fennah's getting new character designs from this user named Mollish. Does this mean he's getting too lazy to render them himself like he rendered Harlow?

Most of Fennah's characters go into four categories, fetish design, asshole, overdone, badly done and sometimes all four. In fact, all the character personalities just boil down to asshole and none of them stand or they have no personality whatsoever

P.S: The reason why a character appears in more then one category is because they apply to all those categories.

P.S:

Fetish design means it has tits and hips and all that fetishy goodness

Asshole means it is a jerk and has no personality besides it

Overdone means to slow it down on the limbs and other excess body parts

Badly done means it is so badly designed that that it gives you a headache looking at

Fetish design:

Hyzenthlay

Felicity

Helgan

Wexle

Lucy

Winifred

Locket

Methusa

Celia

Harlow

Teazzer

Freyda

Asshole:

Dalton

Helgan

Wexle

Whittaker

Mystique

Dalton

Fontaine

Winifred

Celia

Harlow

Teazzer

Greta

Penelope

Overdone:

Yeshua

Ludwig

Fleischer

Dalton

Helgan

Fontaine

Hayden

Locket

Sombra

Celia

Fiona

Thallius

Freyda

Wyley

Elmyra

Badly designed:

Whittaker

Bamforth

Quinn

WinifredHayden

Locket

Methusa

Nathanial

Fiona

Thallius

Bazzil

Freyda

Elmyra

Penelope

None:

Dorothy

Marcy

Fennah just posted a head canon of Lucy's voice and she moves, but terrible. I can agree with Fennah's Kiwifarms thread that it's better then normal, but it's always Lucy Lucy Lucy and nobody gets any fucking attention. Who tf is Goldune and fucking Sally Porter

I heard Elmyra is a character from the second book and I have to give Fennah some credit for this, as he decided to spread out some characters, but if all those other characters are second book characters and you don't at least show us what they look like or release a book description, the community will probably go fucking crazy.

We saw some commissions from Sam and they don't look too bad, unlike that Wither scp thing. It looks good when he just renders a character, but not when it's actually moving.

Is Fennah gonna ever stop stalling with his work? He never posts anything about his book or the characters anymore and he's just doing stupid commissions

I have an idea. How about you animate the other character involved in the conversations your characters have with each other and it would be two in one because you'd show off two or more characters voices and this would get done a lot quicker.

I found a commission for Fennah of Lucy. Her tongue's sticking out and she's all drooly