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Complaints about Fennah's animation tests: Sweeney:

Beginning: Lucy's ears are moving too much and they shouldn't do that unless if Lucy is actually moving

0:31: Shuck's horns are too close to his eyes

Overall: The sound was bland, Shuck looked disproportionate, like his head was too small for his body and the background didn't actually allow me to see Shuck too wel

3/10

I Started a Joke:

0:43: Those self harm scars look disgusting and if you ever saw the Trust episode, her claws aren't even capable of making cuts that big + those bandages obviously aren't covering the scars up

1:35: Her neck looked too bulged toward

Overall: Winifred's neck is too long and bulges out and she never does much beside look all sad and depressed whilst walking

2/10, this song is a joke

Hellfire:

Overall: Ludwig always seemed to be slightly crouching, which he should get uncomfortable after a while, but he keeps doing it and his skin is too shiny.

2/10, more like Hellno

Bob:

0:07: Stuff like eyes inflating when you're dealing with children's toys, but not animals

Personal Jesus (1):

0:07: Showing off Yeshua's butt

0:15: Showing off Skittles for teeth, like I wouldn't display a candy addiction proudly

0:48: I don't want to see more of his butt

1:05: Ah sh*t here we go again

Overall: His tails move too much and the constant showing of the tails is pointless.

Pure fetish material, 2/10

Animator Breaks the Internet:

Intro: He synced up muscles donkey to Smashmouth? Go smash his mouth

0:19: Those dance moves are too unnatural

This entire animation is a crapshow, I'm sorry

0/10

The Return:

Intro: Tails don't move when an animal is resting

0:34: The butts, stop

0:57: The teeth seem stuck together like a rice crispy treat when you split it in half, or like chewing gum in cartoons

1:05: This is very flashy, and I'm not even epileptic

Overall: The facial movements are overwhelming

4/10, The Return, of my headaches

Sweeney Todd:

0:31: The awkward dance Shuck does

Overall:

Shuck is put in geometrically impossible positions

This animation is full of sh*t, 3/10

Control:

0:48: What the heck did she just do with her mouth

1:00: Her feet look like hands

1:35: The close up of her mouth is disgusting

1:43: That sudden movement

Overall: She seems to be moving more and the self harm scars look less disgusting, but the constant movement of the tails is wack

Better, 5/10 Riding Man:

Intro: What the heck is he doing

Overall: Fleischer's wings are too big for his body

Goodish, 5/10

Sound of Silence:

1:44: Cool it with the special effects

Overall: The fingers seem too long and stick like and the song sucks

4/10, no

Heathens:

0:26: Constant ear twitching

0:43: What the heck is she doing

1:15: Can barely process what's going on with that overexaggerated movementOverall: It's alright until the end, but the song sucked, 5/10

Circular Road:

0:06: Her wing looks like it was too big for her body

0:12: What's with the constant shaking of the hips

0:18: What's going on here

0:31: When she starts peaking through that red wall, her left front leg seem a little messed up

1:16: Her tail flapping around like a snake

1:32: The flashing in the background doesn't match up with her movement

Overall: Too flashy and chaotic

Handicap unicorn dragon, 3/10

Born Depressed:

. 0:59: Showing off her biceps

1:02: Her weapons should be clashing with each othera or hitting her but yet they aren't, and they look about her body size, which is unnatural

Overall: It's kinda fetishy and way too flashy and wexle's biceps look slimy and disgusting. She also has hentai tentacles on her back that are more fit for lesbian porn than a necrophilia show.

No explanation needed, 1/10

Dead Men:

0:32: The knives in Whittaker's hands are not spinning properly and they keep clipping through his hands and they also move like animal crossing bees rather than knives

0:38: The knives aren't even attached to his hands anymore

1:17: Epilepsy warning

2:08: Bamforth's hands look molded together

Overall: Bamforth's hair barely moves and Whittaker walks like he has hemorrhoids

Screw you, 4/10

Oom Pah Pah:

0:35: Left leg clipped through her right leg

1:07: Anybody knows you can't do that

1:28: Legs clipping through each other again

Overall: Eye and movements are overexaggerated and she did dance moves that don't correspond with her movement

He didn't improve, 3/10

This Bloke Came up to Me:

1:21: Fleischer's exaggerated mouth movements

1:45: What the f is Fleischer doing with his chest

Overall: The mouth movements were overexaggerated and Fleischer's chest looked like rubber, also the f word was used every five seconds

Boring, 2/10

Pocket Full of Fun:

Intro: That high heel piece would collapse under her weight

0:19: It's shadowed, but here's some more fetish material

1:18: Oh look, a thigh fetish

Overall: It's way too bright and the fur is way too exaggerated to focus on her face.

Nobody wants big titty kitty, 1/10

Personal Jesus (2):

0:14: Fix the colorful teeth, it's unnatural and weird

0:29: That unnatural movement like he doesn't have a spine

1:02: He shouldn't be able to dance like that without tripping on his tails

1:17: What kind of terrible manipulation method is this?

1:28: It's ultimate fetish woman looking more unclothed and worse than before

Overall: This is way too flashy, even compared to his other animation tests, Mystique isn't canon, the song sounds like wiping your butt with sandpaper, roughly, his ears lack movement and how original to use Personal Jesus again

Furry fetish the sequel, -75/100

Spooky Scary Lacemaker:

Overall: Her eyes aren't even correctly rigged and using somebody as a drum is a sick and twisted thing

Beauty of Annihilation:

Intro: Remember gravity?

0:25: Why are the gold strings shaking though

0:53: Never in her design or lore did she ever have a jacket

1:06: Nothing can bend that far back without breaking their spine or falling

1:15: Ow the edge

1:37: you can't see her mop hair until it randomly glows

Overall: The mop hair gets in her face, which would prevent her from seeing, and her antlers shake, making then look more like a floppy sock then antlers

Carpet Crawlers:

0:41: The coat is obviously clipping through his horns

1:52: He's moving a lot and his tails are not

Overall: He should topple over with that much weight on his back and should've never gotten that coat on

3/10

What Did She Know About Railways:

0:27: Why is the stage all tilted like that and how is she staying on it?

0:31: Head really bounced

0:46: The stillness of her face is really bothersome

1:01: She looks so disproportionate and wrong

1:07: Way too much chest jiggling

1:11: What the

1:29: Hair doesn't move that much

1:40: Her eyes are yellow in a way that makes her look disgusting

1:51: look at 0:46 timestamp

1:55: Nobody can do that

Overall: The eyes look like they got no attention whatsoever and they look terrible, especially the red eye, the mouth movements are over exaggerated and her head is too small.

5/10, this one wasn't as cancerous to watch

The Immigrant Song:

Intro: Those legs already look wrong

0:20: Should the chest be bouncing around that much?

0:26: Legs are too far forward

0:33: Fetishy

0:43: That looked too unnatural

0:57: What's wrong with her leg?

1:31: Her chest

2:10: Wow the edge

2:20: Why the fusk is she sitting like that

2:21: That sounds like hentai moaning

Overall: Her chest was buldged out and bouncy and that cover of immigrant song gave the actual song a bad name

-20/10, cancer

Lucy Lacemaker DANCE!:

0:02: Legs look over muscled and broken

0:04: Toes like those look terrible

0:09: Chest is loosely bouncing again

0:11: Sliding backward with no friction whatsoever

0:14: First of all, that dance is old, second of all, the movement is really ecstatic and the flashing doesn't help.0:16: You can't dance ecstatic like that on your heels

0:18: Psst, hey Sam, when legs move like that, the rest of your leg moves too

0:24: Why are her arms switching between being muscular and thin?

0:28: Her shoulders are too furry in this shot


 * 1) Overall: Sam, your animations are getting worse. How about you listen to people on Kiwi farms or in general, take their advice and stop saying they're "bullying" you because they're speaking the truth.
 * 2) 1/10